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Twisted Time

Despair inside a twisted soul
Already tainted black
While insanity takes its toll
As strength begins to lack

Deeply falling, falling
Waiting for the end
Just to start crawling
The insainty is just about to begin

Twisted you may call this look,
for sane is not the word
of these writing painted black
And feelings so absurd

But this is my time
And my wasted Rhyme

Alone

Poem is not about New Moon

Waves crashing on the rocks
Drowning in the shallow end
Innocent bystanders on the docks
I hope not to offend
By the weakness that holds me
Bound to this fate by despair
No one willing to pay the fee
Selflessness becomes to rare
As i slowly slip away
On this bright and sunny day

Dear John Love

Bullets fly all around
Bodies begin to hit the ground
No chance for good-bye
No time to sit and cry
Sallow the pity and despair
As your heart begins to tear
For a place to call home
To not be solemnly alone
Miss the love ones far away
Dreaming of them everyday
Their the hope in your eye
The strength to go by and by
All that's left in this place
A friend's love is grace

Black Rose

Blacken Rose bleeding crimson
While thunder and lighting begin
Soaking that poor rose in sin
The darkest night will soon pass
Than greener can grow the grass
Reminding her why she is here
Shedding blood, sweat and fear
Rose refuses to fade away
Waiting for a brighter day
Wading in a new start
With a healing heart

Twisted View

Back from Basic...shit didn't work out
My depression really took a toll...
So I'm back for now
Which means you get a view into my Twisted Mind.....

My First Tattoo

Forgive

"The weak can never forgive. Forgiveness is an attribute of the strong" -Gandhi
And with that quote, that sums out my feelings towards the guy I've been writing about, I leave my blog for 9weeks (Basic training)

Fit to Forgive

Furry flies fast altering seasons
Frost bite without much reason
Forgiveness unavailable in this wind
For winter and spring begin to blend

Isolated in ice by misplaced blame
Insanely offering something sane
Ice has covered your young soul
I'm trapped taking the ice's toll

Terribly tearing tears form my eye
That's defiantly a frozen spring lie
Time will reveal that you're wrong
Though I have enjoyed Spring all along

Foolish would it be to waste the sunlight
Insane to believe that you are worth a fight
This Twisted Soul will rejoice without you tonight!

Defeted in Love (version 2)

As the bomb flies through the air
My heart still feels despair
For the girl back home
Who left me all alone

All that's left now is smoke
As for my heart by your cruel joke
I guess I wasn't enough
As if this place isn't already tough

Another mission completed
But as for love I am defeated
Time to pack up again
But without you I can not win

***This is the version I wrote for my friend before he put his lines in with it

Defeated in Love

 
As bombs fall from the air
My heart still feels deep despair
For the girl back home
Who left me all alone


My heart is aching
& My back is breaking
I love her so
But she keeps say'n no
  
Got a dangerous life ahead
Hope i don't end up dead
I hope she will see
We was meant to last for eternity
  
I hope she'll forget me
But i doubt she will agree
I try to keep my head held high
But somtimes i just break down & cry


All that's left now is smoldering fires & choking smoke
similar to my  heart after your real cruel joke
Everytime i think of you
I start felling kinda blue


 I guess I wasn't enough
As if this place isn't already tough
Another mission completed
But as for love I am defeated


Time to pack up again
But without you I cannot win


I co-wrote this with a friend is just beginning to write; Stanzas 1, 6-7 are mine